Milestone 2


Milestone 2 Revised Storyboards

Note:

Before my next milestone/animatic I plan on changing the opening scene to begin with a more mysterious method of framing where the initial fade from black opens to a slow forward pan of the metal panels and heat pipes on the floor. Which then pans outwards and upwards to show the narrator sat in the chair as well as the scene as a whole.

I will attempt to redesign the Sentinel to look less Death Star-ish. Maybe I'll make its exterior shell be made of hexagonal panels instead of a smooth surface. Something that will break up the smoothness of the surface. 

Lastly, I'll switch the last storyboard of the narrator to the very end, so that the animation ends with the narrator's face as he finishes the monologue. 







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